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A film I wrote with Moxy Fruvous songs.

poll Did you like the script?
Yes! It was perfect and I wouldn't change a word.
It was really good. I don't know how to fix it but I am looking
It was okay. I guess.
I didn't like it.
It sucks! It was the worse piece of crap I have ever read!
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   Discussion: A film I wrote with Moxy Fruvous songs.
J. Andrew World · 14 years, 5 months ago

I wrote a movie and I would like feed back, this is my first draft. I have some ideas what I want to change for the second draft, but I am not ready to write it until I get some feed back. Please read it here, and let me know what you think?

J. Andrew World · 14 years, 4 months ago
I have a movie-producer-friend who is willing to look at my script, so I need to do the next draft and I do need some criticism. If you are willing to help, I would appreciate it.

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