The lyrics to Cadence Carroll's Evolve go:
As we revolve we will evolve to place of love.
From the first time I heard the song I thought it should go.
As we revolve we will evolve to a planet of love.
Planets revolve not places. I also think it scans better. If you don't know the song you can listen to it here: Evolve at CD Baby.com
The other is in the Kenendys' song Stand
the real lyric is:
I searched for God, I found it in your eyes
I always thought it scanned better with
I've searched for God, I've found him in your eyes
It is perhaps sexist and less politically correct but it sounds better. The soft him fits better than the plosive "it."
I have heard the Kennedys sing it with "him" instead of "it."
Are there any songs that you've wanted to improve?